The first story is an idea I've been kicking around for a couple of years. The way this works is that each post is part of the ongoing story; one post is not the entire story. I'll title posts so that you know where we are. I promise not to mix stories together-- once we start one, each subsequent post will continue that story until fin.
Feedback is not only allowed, it's encouraged. Please let me know what you think. I may not agree with you, but criticism is the writer's nourishment, and comments make me a better writer and, more importantly, create a better story.
Thanks for coming along! We're off!